Sunday, August 7, 2011

This is the back of my book where the description is, can you tell me if it's good?

Bring more detail to the hooker, I know I'd put it down if the synopsis was that short. make it a little longer, more detailed (reason why her folks divorced, the troubles she is going to before contemplating suicide etc). Unless this is a short story, you're going to have a lot more information to input to capture a reader's attention.

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